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Its just really laste, for pico day I mean
and I could understand that because hey, its 3d and that takes a long time... but then it ends before anything even happens. I thoroughly enjoyed it, for all of its 27.65 seconds of action....
but come on, it had a lazy ending. finish this, make it epic, and submit it on the day, next year, picoday 2010 :)
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pretty good... but the varying quality of Voice Acting sound clips drove me crazy through out. some of the VA was just sort of bad too.
I liked the elaborate camera angles, but some drawings just looked sort of awkward, like the beginning shot at the door
anyway, good effort. I give you eight out of 10 for creative story, dialogue, and decent art. I deduct two for those cons mentioned
keep up the good work, hope this helped :)
Author's Response:
Getting all the voice acting together on this one was a big pain, and some of the voice acting is better than other parts. It's something I hope to improve upon with my next cartoon, but for the moment being, it is what it is.
In experimenting with new angles, some will work better than others. It just comes with the territory I suppose, but it's something to improve upon for sure.
I'm glad you liked it, and your commentary is helpful. Thank you very much.
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smooth animation, nice creepiness....
the only thing I didn't like was that the music started on the preloader page. that implies that no effort was made to make the animatio go with the rythmic music choice
anyway, good work! congrats on the reward
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