Score: 6

"I dont know"

submission: BOOM BOTS

date: December 6, 2009

Its just really laste, for pico day I mean

and I could understand that because hey, its 3d and that takes a long time... but then it ends before anything even happens. I thoroughly enjoyed it, for all of its 27.65 seconds of action....

but come on, it had a lazy ending. finish this, make it epic, and submit it on the day, next year, picoday 2010 :)

Score: 8

"theres good and bad"

submission: A Very Christmas Incident

date: December 4, 2009

pretty good... but the varying quality of Voice Acting sound clips drove me crazy through out. some of the VA was just sort of bad too.

I liked the elaborate camera angles, but some drawings just looked sort of awkward, like the beginning shot at the door

anyway, good effort. I give you eight out of 10 for creative story, dialogue, and decent art. I deduct two for those cons mentioned

keep up the good work, hope this helped :)

Score: 9

"twas really good!"

submission: The unholy tree of doom

date: August 14, 2009

smooth animation, nice creepiness....

the only thing I didn't like was that the music started on the preloader page. that implies that no effort was made to make the animatio go with the rythmic music choice

anyway, good work! congrats on the reward

Score: 10

"great!"

submission: Ye Scurvy Dawgs

date: August 14, 2009

very unexpected turn of events, and good humor.

I was so certain they were going to harpoon him on his way out for bounty. I guess they were nice honest pirates heh heh.

only thing I can suggest is using tween easing on your tweens to make the animation a bit smoother at parts.

an otherwise excellent piece!

Score: 9

"wow, and a shame"

submission: Brick vs Blossom

date: August 11, 2009

this is so well animated.. it's gotten a better score if only it had sound fx to go with the music

that end screen wasn't very impressive either.

Score: 10

"awesome!"

submission: VHD's FPS Tutorial

date: August 2, 2009

I've been looking all over today for a good tutorial on fps's

what I have so far is a combination of at least 4 tutorials, but the AS found here really tied everything I had together, and eradicated the glitches.

My only question is this: how can you make an enemy kill able if the enemy MC is stored in an MC (so that someone can make them run around in a loop)

Score: 8

"good but"

submission: Making A Decent FPS

date: August 2, 2009

it doesn't seem to work! so what good is a tutorial if the product doesn't work? I may have missed something, or am doing something wrong... though I redid all AS and doublechecked everything.

maybe I'm just doing something stpid, right in front of my face. please help, if you ever check this username anymore.

Score: 10

"really, really great sir"

submission: Pencilmation #7

date: July 29, 2009

hurray, a hand! the hand seperates you from all of the copy cats out there.

I have kept up with this series and love every single one. however, I preferred the line quality and type of lines shown in the episode with blue paper and white led. maybe it's no different, and only seemed that way because of the colors..

but yeah, my only suggestion is, that (if the line style was indeed any different in the blue paper white line episode) you use that style for the drawings (in black led of course)

keep them coming!

Score: 10

"awesome!"

submission: Robot Dinosaurs

date: July 29, 2009

but just so random.. lol

1 level, no explained motives of the dinos.... but just so great at the same time! anyway, this has re inspired me for my next flash.

a couple of things (so that this isn't a useless review)

maybe the dino could change direction.. though I couldn't figure out how. would've been nice to be able to go and point the other way, especially for the boss fight

some sort of motive for the dinosaurs... though it may be considered a pro that you didn't know what the hell they were doing and why.. adds tio the humor I suppose.

Score: 9

"good, as always"

submission: : Zip Codes :

date: July 11, 2009

the animation, lip syncing, and graphics were all up to snuff with your other work

the only suggestion I have is in the dialogue. a 'zip code' is used to identify a town, not a personal adress, so starbucks couldn't have possibly sent mail to foamy with just that information. I may have missed a detail though, so if that sounded stupid and useless, I'm sorry.